Monday, 24 August 2015

Writing-WALT to write a myth

keep your writing in order:
beginning, middle and end
make sure you have your plan
put it into your own words
use more interesting words, 
time connectives - suddenly, later, unexpectedly, meanwhile, next minute...after that
proof read your writing
highlighter strategy

Editing your story is a very important  - Make sure you read it through carefully and check:
Will your story make sense to your reader and will it interest them?
Have you given a satisfactory ending?
Is your spelling correct?
Make sure you have used a range of punctuation ,  .  !  “  “  ?  (  ) 
 Start a new paragraph for:
•A change of time, e.g. Early the next morning…
•A change of place e.g. On the other side of the mountain stood…
•A change of action e.g. At that moment the lights went out.
A change of character e.g. Unexpectedly, Dr Townley rounded the corner.

On an alien planet there is a guy called Bob who is  an alien inventor/nerd. He has a hot shot brother called Qwade. On his planet Qwade is a hero and he is always on the move with missions. Now for the story I am going to tell you. Qwade is  assigned a mission to make contact with another species. He hops in to his awesome green space ship and blasts off for the planet that the alien species live on. What he does not know is that the species is deadly. Three space hours later he is entering the atmosphere of the swampy planet. He lands near the alien life base then he sets off a trap and gets caught in a net. Communications are low he has enough power to contact his brother and say "help". Then they chuck him in to a prison cell and leave him there. Now back on their planet Bob was building a wearable machine to rescue people. When it had every thing but it needed a power source  to start it. That power source  is found on the meca planet so he packed his bags and set off to the meca planet for the power source. On his space ship he intercepted a call from  his brother it was the help message. Bob said"this is the perfect time to try my invention once I get that power source." We are just landing on the meca planet. He locates the power source in a cave in a volcano he jumps in to his space suit on. And jumped on to the metal planet meca. Then he make his way through the cave into the volcano. The heat levels are rising high he looks for the energy he sees an orb hovering above lava he activate his hover board and flyies to the orb and using a container he grabbed the energy orb. The cave started to collapse on him he flys out on his hover board and shots out of the volcano. He heads back to his ship to go home  and put on his machine and headed to the alien planet. He landed safely on the planet.,then he saw his brothers space ship he walked in to the alien base and set an alam off. Then he saw the species and it was horrible they had huge teeth and big eyes. He shot it in the tummy and then it lay silent. He ran through the base he found his brother and ran to his ship and flew off back to ther planet. 

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